Really digging the tune. Good flow with the syllables keeping good rythm. Take heed though; your lines from the verse with "the clock laughing at me" and on, sounds sloppy and chopped up. You should try to re-record that part, as it breaks the whole song. Maybe write down the lyrics as you intend to rap them (this goes for the whole song, as you add and take away a few words here and there). Good job overall! 3.5/5.